This is some sections from the the portfolio I showed to Steph from Elmwood
Steph gave me some great feedback that will improve my design and layout. overall i THIN SHE THOUGHT THAT i HAD IMPROVED SINCE TEH LAST TIME i SAW HER. i was really happy with the feedback i received and thought that the overall presentation was good.
Stephs Feedback:
FILM2014 BRIEF : use 4 big images so you can explain and clearly see visuals
CHAMPNEYS : Fave and body i page for each - take off 1st images
work on application to make it look more like pattern prints :large scale to us colour and thick line around app layout.
LTA - logi is tiny needs to be larger with white background
TV screens > Cinema > screens show concept 1 or 2 rooms or corridor.bathroom concept explain who this would moves
App for cinea: mae the edges round like tickets to link to web
Full part tern for title page - champneys
discribption on piety book layout + band big on there.
I am really please with the feedback and will work on this to improve my portfolio as it all be better for orfeesional use. I incorpeted brief that I felt were relevant to my ucrret design practice.
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