Re-working from Feedback

One of the main points from my feedback was that the design was too much aimed at women, I have developed this with a change in colour, which automatically prompted some layout variation.

I have started to layer up some pages in terms of type and image to create some excitement and variation on pages. This should help to also separate the pages and keep it fresh yet still legible and informative.

I feel that this will work through printing also. Having bold blocks of colour should bring some depth and variation to the pages and this could look good when printed.